新目標(biāo)八年級英語上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練(上)

1、1八年級上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練八年級上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練作文指導(dǎo)加范例點評與練習(xí)作文指導(dǎo)加范例點評與練習(xí)(上)Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation寫作指南寫作指南本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫關(guān)于假期活動的文章。寫這樣的文章時，要從以下幾個方面入手：1你在哪兒度的假期？2在假期期間你做什么了？3那兒的天氣怎么樣？4你認為那兒的人怎么樣？5你喜歡那兒的食物嗎？為什么？由于寫的活動已經(jīng)過去，故時態(tài)用一般過去時。常用句型：1Iwentto..

2、.onvacation.2Thefoodtherewas...3Thepeopletherewere...佳作欣賞去年的暑假你是怎樣度過的？去了什么地方？那里的食物怎么樣？那里的人怎么樣？有哪些有趣的或難忘的事情發(fā)生？和大家分享一下吧。請運用本單元所學(xué)知識，寫一篇關(guān)于假期活動的短文。Istillrememberedmylastsummervacation.MyfamilyIwenttoseemygrparentsinthecountry

3、side.Theweathertherewasnice.SometimesIwenttothemountainswithmygrfather.SometimesIwentswimmingbymyself.Mygrmothercookeddeliciousfoodfuseveryday.Intheevening，weallsattogetherwatchedTV.Whatagreattimewehad!點評：作者用Istillrememb

4、eredmylastsummervacation引入正題，介紹了在暑假期間和家人去鄉(xiāng)下看望祖父母的經(jīng)歷。重點介紹了在鄉(xiāng)下的活動，講述得條理有序。其中sometimes的使用，使文中內(nèi)容更為豐富。最后以Whatagreattimewehad！結(jié)尾，既寫出了自己的感受，又對全文進行了總結(jié)。寫作練習(xí)寫作練習(xí)Unit1假設(shè)你是張杰。你父母去過世界上許多地方旅游。然而，給你印象最深的是巴黎之旅。請根據(jù)下面表格提示，以ThetriptoParis為

5、題寫一篇70字左右的文章。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3NameActivityHowoftenJohnPlayingbasketballAlmosteverydayDavidSurfingtheInterOncetwoweeksHanMeiShoppingThreetimesaweekLiPingReadinginthelibraryOnceaweek___________________________________________

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7、__________________________________________________________________________________Therearefiftystudentsinourclass.John，David，HanMeiLiPingaremybestfriends.Letmetellyouwhattheylikedoingbest.Johnlikesplayingbasketballbest.H

8、eplaysitalmosteveryday.Hesaysbasketballisveryexciting，buthedoesntcareabouttheresultsofthegame.DavidlikessurfingtheInter，buthisparentsdontwanthimtoplaywiththecomputertoooften.SohesurfstheInteroncetwoweeks.HanMeilikesshopp

9、ingbest.Shedoesshoppingthreetimesaweek.LiPinglikesreadinginthelibrary.Shegoesthereonceaweek.Whataboutyou？Whatdoyoulikedoingbest？Howoftendoyoudoit點評：開篇點題，說明作者的好朋友喜歡的活動，從而為下文做好鋪墊。按照表格，運用恰當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z和句子描述了他們的具體活動，并寫出了從事這些活動的頻率，同時加

10、進了對這些活動的評價，顯得豐滿不空洞。最后兩句緊扣上文，起到了與上文相呼應(yīng)的作用。習(xí)作練習(xí)：Unit2某報社學(xué)生習(xí)作欄目正在向廣大學(xué)生征文。請以Let’sdoexercisetogether為題，根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇6080詞的短文，向該欄目投稿。開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。參考范文：Let’sdoexercisetogether.It’sveryimptantfustodoexercise.Doingexercisecanmakeush

11、ealthyhelpuskeephappy.What’smetakingexerciseisgoodfourstudy.Wecandomanykindsofexercisewheneverwewant.Itisgoodfustogotoschoolonfootbybike.DuringPEclasswecandoexercisesuchasrunningjumpingplayingbasketballsoon.Onweekendswec