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1、中文論文中的英文寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題,中國(guó)醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院,腫瘤研究所,周傳農(nóng),2014.10.29,題目,題目—太繁,二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌Huh-7 細(xì)胞凋亡的實(shí)驗(yàn)及其機(jī)制研究二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌Huh-7 細(xì)胞凋亡及其作用機(jī)制,題目—不全,兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作,不好的中文題目,去垂體幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的觀(guān)察去垂體幼年大鼠的生物學(xué)特性與激素水平,不好的中文題目,中藥松友飲對(duì)體內(nèi)化療后殘

2、余肝癌作用的實(shí)驗(yàn)研究中藥松友飲對(duì)裸鼠體內(nèi)化療后殘余肝癌的作用,,不好的中文題目,IRP對(duì)無(wú)初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和SIgA+細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響板藍(lán)根多糖對(duì)無(wú)初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和SIgA+細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響,題目—錯(cuò)誤,基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展Process in Rat GeneticsProgress in research on rat genetic engineering,題目—太大,不同測(cè)壓方法測(cè)試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓A

3、 comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animalsComparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats,,,不好的英文題目,兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作Establishment of childho

4、od simple obesity animal model Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity,題目—濫用縮寫(xiě),哺乳動(dòng)物 ES 細(xì)胞與 EG 細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展 哺乳動(dòng)物 胚胎干細(xì)胞與 胚胎生殖 細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展 ES embryonic stem cells

5、 EG embryonic germ cells,不好的中文題目 —濫用縮寫(xiě),反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動(dòng)脈結(jié)扎法制作大鼠AMI模型方法對(duì)比研究反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動(dòng)脈結(jié)扎法制作大鼠急性心肌梗死模型方法的比較,題目—濫用縮寫(xiě),乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞NF-κB信號(hào)通路的研究Lactic acid inhibits NF-κB signaling pathways in RIMMVECs

6、 讀者看不懂 RIMMVECs,題目 — 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、大小寫(xiě),Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pigComparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig,不好的中、英文題目,LPS和石墨粉誘

7、導(dǎo)小鼠急性肺損傷病理形態(tài)學(xué)比較Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury中文：應(yīng)寫(xiě)明 脂多糖英文：LPS Lipopolysaccharide英文： power powder,英文題目—拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,Gong H, Shu L, Xu H, Chen B, Mao R, Zhang F, Wang Y.Bilateral

8、internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in young rats. Auton Neurosci. 2013, 173(1-2):39-44. 此文已在國(guó)外正式發(fā)表,不好的英文題目,清腦方對(duì)缺

9、血性眩暈大鼠腦損傷的保護(hù)作用Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vertigo ratsProtective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats,英文題目— 錯(cuò)誤,改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神經(jīng)根壓迫模型的研究 The study

10、 on rat model of lumbar never nerve root compression via modified unilateral hemilaminectomy approach 啰嗦、缺建立、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,英文題目—單復(fù)數(shù),非人靈長(zhǎng)類(lèi)局部腦缺血?jiǎng)游锬Ｐ脱芯楷F(xiàn)狀述評(píng) Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non

11、-human primateReview of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates,英文題目—濫用縮寫(xiě),小型豬體外循環(huán)下心臟手術(shù)的麻醉Anesthesia of Cardiac Surgery Under CPB on SwineAnesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs

12、,英文題目— 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pigComparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig,很錯(cuò)誤的英文題目,基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展Process in Rat Genetics

13、Progress in research on rat genetic engineering,英文題目—錯(cuò)誤用詞,The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled …The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Meta

14、stasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled …,英文題目—很大錯(cuò)誤,常壓缺氧致大鼠小腦浦肯野細(xì)胞急性病理改變的研究Acute pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia,署名與單位,署名—大小寫(xiě),He bao-ming , wa

15、ng zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiaguiHe Bao-ming , Wang Zhizhong，Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao, Ouyang Xiaohui, Su Jiagui 姓名大寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),單位錯(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)名、大小寫(xiě),The forth Applicated Hospita

16、l of Suzhou Universitythe Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University,單位—不全,Academy of Military SciencesAcademy of Military Medical Sciences,單位—大小寫(xiě),Department of …, The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin

17、300162, china.Department of …, the Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.,,署名、單位,Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng，Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming，F(xiàn)eng gansheng. Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, China(Wang

18、 Wang Hospital),人名的大小寫(xiě)。單位名稱(chēng)錯(cuò)誤,署名、單位大小寫(xiě)、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang ,ZHANG Yin-hong (the center of Laboratory animal of Shan Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001, China),英文摘要中濫用縮寫(xiě),英文摘要—濫用縮寫(xiě),Objec

19、tive： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and … RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect,濫用縮寫(xiě)—英文摘要,IHC analysis on TMA revealed that …Immun

20、ohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that …,英文摘要—濫用縮寫(xiě),To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH.To screen the genes differentially expressed

21、in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).,,（摘要首句）,用錯(cuò)詞,錯(cuò)詞,大鼠給予藥液灌胃All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.,,錯(cuò)詞,神經(jīng)上皮移植Neu

22、ralepithelial transplantationNeuroepithelial transplantation,錯(cuò)詞,巴馬小型豬12只12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into … 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into …,,錯(cuò)詞,Low doesLow doseHigh doesHigh dose,通篇如此,

23、錯(cuò)詞,RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of … RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of …,,錯(cuò)詞,Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue et al. Other ad

24、verse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue, etc.,,錯(cuò)詞,GeneBank GenBank,錯(cuò)詞意思反了,正常、特異抗原批內(nèi)變異系數(shù)分別為8.3%和6.4%，批間平均變異系數(shù)分別為9.7%和11.5%.The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and speci

25、al antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively,,,錯(cuò)詞,評(píng)價(jià)其抗癌作用To access the anti-tumor effect … To assess the anti-tumor effect …,,錯(cuò)詞,探討其作用機(jī)理To explic

26、it the molecular mechanism of …To explore the molecular mechanism of …,英文摘要首句,,錯(cuò)詞,脂質(zhì)體 LipidosomeLiposome （該文論述基因治療的主要手段）,錯(cuò)詞,系統(tǒng)性感染Systematic infectionSystemic infection,錯(cuò)詞,was analysised was analyzed,錯(cuò)詞、

27、單復(fù)數(shù),The sequence were comparised with the … The sequences were compared with the …,,,單復(fù)數(shù),The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested

28、 continuously.,頻繁的錯(cuò)誤注釋,濫用注釋,糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus )糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus),一篇關(guān)于小型豬糖尿病模型的論文,錯(cuò)誤注釋,腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（adenovirus）,錯(cuò)誤注釋,單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simple virus）單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）,錯(cuò)誤注釋,無(wú)特定病原體 (spec

29、ial pathogen free，SPF)無(wú)特定病原體 (specific pathogen free，SPF),錯(cuò)誤注釋,獨(dú)立通風(fēng)籠具(Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC)(Individually ventilated cages，IVC),錯(cuò)誤注釋,熱休克蛋白( Hot shock protein, HSP)( Heat shock preotein, HSP),錯(cuò)誤注釋

30、,C反應(yīng)蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP） C反應(yīng)蛋白（C-reactive protein，CRP）,錯(cuò)誤注釋,集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay ),錯(cuò)誤注釋,自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural killer cell

31、，NK),錯(cuò)誤注釋,神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（never growth factor，NGF） 神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（nerve growth factor，NGF）,全文多處，一律錯(cuò),錯(cuò)誤注釋,表皮生長(zhǎng)因子受體2（human epidermal growth factor-2，HER-2）（human epidermal growth factor receptor-2，HER-2）,濫用縮寫(xiě),圖1 Ca.C 中survivn陽(yáng)性

32、 （一張照片的說(shuō)明） （文內(nèi)根本就沒(méi)有見(jiàn)到過(guò)Ca.C ） （猜想是癌細(xì)胞的意思）,參考文獻(xiàn),參考文獻(xiàn)丟失第一作者、姓名顛倒,Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon Park，et al. (原雜志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Ki

33、moon Park. Lee J, An J, Yang HJ，et al.,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者姓名拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Correlation between … Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. Correlation between …,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者姓與名顛倒、標(biāo)點(diǎn),Maria WW,Edward P,Den

34、nis L,et al . Maria Werner-Wasik，Edward Pequinot，Dennis Leeper， et al.Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leeper D, et al.,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者格式怪異,Giuseppe Verdile?Samuel E Gandy ?Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Marti

35、ns RN.,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者etc./et al.,Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al. et alii (and others) 人 et cetera (and the rest, and the others)物,,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者人數(shù)多、人名繁、出現(xiàn)號(hào)碼,Kunihiro Nis

36、hida1, Georghia Michael1, Dobromir Dobrev2 ...and Stanley Nattel1Nishida K, Michael G, Dobrev D, et al.,參考文獻(xiàn)出現(xiàn) 兩批作者?,Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine …Va

37、nini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, Baghdoyan HA. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine …,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者11≠ll、姓名顛倒、大小寫(xiě)、etc.,Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H. noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al.,,,參考文獻(xiàn)

38、錯(cuò)寫(xiě)中國(guó)作者、標(biāo)點(diǎn),Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al.Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, …,參考文獻(xiàn)作者、文題、標(biāo)點(diǎn),Bakeman R QV.OTS. A program for converting ……Bakeman R, Quera V. O

39、TS: a program for converting ……,參考文獻(xiàn)作者、文題、雜志、標(biāo)點(diǎn),Quinn P, Kerin J. F.,Warners G.M. Improverd pregnancy rate in hunman in vitro fertilization with the use of medium based on the composition of hunman tubal fluid.Fert

40、il. Steril.,1985,44:493-498.,,,,,,參考文獻(xiàn)引錯(cuò)作者、文題有錯(cuò)、雜志拼錯(cuò),Schmitt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell

41、 death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251,,參考文獻(xiàn)卷號(hào)怪異,Compr Ther, 2010, V36N:3-13. Compr Ther, 2010, 36:3-13.,參考文獻(xiàn)丟失問(wèn)號(hào)、錯(cuò)誤的卷號(hào)頁(yè)碼,Inferior vena cava leiomyosarcoma:

42、 is reconstruction necessary after resection. J Am Coll Surg, 2010, 211(1):145-146. Daylami R, Amiri A, Goldsmith B, et al. Inferior vena cava leiomyosarcoma: is reconstruction necessary after resection? J Am Coll Surg

43、, 2010, 210:185-190.,,參考文獻(xiàn)同一本雜志兩種寫(xiě)法,Chishima T, Yang M, Miyagi Y, et al. Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A. 1997, 94(11):573-576. Humpherys D, Eggan K, Akutsu H, et al. Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. U S A. 2002, 99(20): 12889-1289

44、4.,參考文獻(xiàn)缺雜志、缺標(biāo)點(diǎn),Age-related increase … inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-related increase … inducible atrial fibrillation. J Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93.,參考文獻(xiàn)—作者姓名書(shū)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,Li J H WQS. All

45、ogrooming in wild Tibetan macaques …Li JH，Wang QS. Allogrooming in wild Tibetan macaques …,參考文獻(xiàn)學(xué)位、雜志全稱(chēng)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫(xiě)、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,Shanglong Yao, Ph. D,Dan Feng,M. D. Losartan Attenuates Ventilator-Induced Lung Injury. Journal of sur

46、jical Research, 2008, 145(1): 25-32.,,,,,K TA, R M, B C, et al. Poly (ADP-ribose) polymeraseinhibition improves post ischemicmyocardial function after cardiople-giacardiopulmonary bypass. J Am Coll Surg, 2003, 197(2):270

47、-277.Khan TA, Ruel M, Bianchi C, et al.,參考文獻(xiàn)缺姓名、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,,,,參考文獻(xiàn)文題首詞丟失,Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains,參考文獻(xiàn)丟了作者、寫(xiě)了單位,Cleveland

48、Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143.,,,參考文獻(xiàn)—文題脫漏,Fos

49、sella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Randomized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy r

50、egimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362.,參考文獻(xiàn)—格式顛倒,Circulation. 2003 Sep 9;108 Suppl 1:II230-6. Gene transfer of hepatocyte growth factor attenuates postinfarction he

51、art failure. Jayasankar V, Woo YJ, Bish LT, Pirolli TJ, Chatterjee S, Berry MF, Burdick J, Gardner TJ, Sweeney HL.,其他,不好的文章首句,MG患者通常有眼肌受累，……重癥肌無(wú)力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，,不好的摘要首句,To Investigate the mechanism of

52、NAFLD in gerbilsTo Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils,中英文的語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)該一致,結(jié)論 Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)移過(guò)程中發(fā)揮著重要的調(diào)控作用， … Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an im

53、portant role in the regulation of　growth and meastasis of lung cancer.,,材料與方法,Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups.Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two group

54、s.,Respectively, 英文無(wú)頓號(hào),The values of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mL·s、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mL·s、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65 (77.28-256.20) mL/min

55、、8.49 (5.82-12.70) mL、5.72 (3.62-7.01)mL、68.12 (39.14-85.28)%、34.11 (28.25-46.87) mL/min、38.28 (30.75-50.25) mL/min, respectively.,（9個(gè)參數(shù)）,英文無(wú)頓號(hào),,,,,,,,拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,主要組織相容性復(fù)合體II類(lèi) (majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II, MHC II)主要組織相

56、容性復(fù)合體II類(lèi) (major histocompatibility complex II, MHC II),大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,20 mg/Kg20 mg/kg 1 KDa~100 KDa分子量 1 kDa~100 kDa分子量ALT( u/l) ALT ( U/l),未寫(xiě)明箭頭和圓圈說(shuō)明什么問(wèn)題。,討 論,SCI拒稿十大原因,1. 可讀性差，英文書(shū)寫(xiě)太差、與雜志內(nèi)容或格式不符2. 原創(chuàng)性不足，證據(jù)和邏輯不清3. 摘要

57、與正文不一致4. 文體雜亂，序言太長(zhǎng)，缺乏完整性5. 應(yīng)按照CONSORT指南書(shū)寫(xiě)，不可缺項(xiàng)6. 結(jié)果凌亂7. 統(tǒng)計(jì)學(xué)處理錯(cuò)誤8. 討論離開(kāi)正題，進(jìn)行無(wú)關(guān)的議論9. 結(jié)論未充分結(jié)合觀(guān)察結(jié)果10. 未引用最新進(jìn)展的文獻(xiàn)，過(guò)時(shí)了,20120425 亞洲環(huán)宇 MEDCOM ASIA,,,,撰寫(xiě)欠佳的文稿,國(guó)際期刊的錄用標(biāo)準(zhǔn),一流：思路新穎 70%，實(shí)驗(yàn)25%，寫(xiě)作5%二流： 40% 40%

58、 20%三流： 20% 50% 30%,網(wǎng)上,思考與建議,因果探討,折射出我國(guó)醫(yī)學(xué)英語(yǔ)教育的缺失第一作者的科研作風(fēng)和實(shí)際水平通訊作者的把關(guān)和實(shí)際水平審稿人的把關(guān)和實(shí)際水平直接影響與長(zhǎng)期影響,具體建議,端正科研作風(fēng)優(yōu)化學(xué)習(xí)方法，閱讀文獻(xiàn)不忘學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)導(dǎo)師講解英文書(shū)寫(xiě)的重要意義導(dǎo)師的具體指導(dǎo)和督促檢查,寫(xiě)文章的具體建議,中文為主，也審英文重在內(nèi)容，兼顧文字和格式