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1、2011年12月大學英語六級考試TheWaytoSuccessSuccessissomethingeveryonelooksflongsfdiesf.ButhaveyoueverconsideredwhatsuccessisSomemayholdthatsuccessmeansonehasbeautifullifelikeprettyhousecoolcarsgreatpower.It’sindeedonewaytodefinesucc
2、ess.Buttomesuccessisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing.Toachievethiskindofsuccessonehastobearinmindthreeessentialprerequisitesnamelyknowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesinpossessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinteresthaving
3、thediligencetorealizeyourdream.Inotherwdstheyare“what”“why”“how”ofsuccess.It’sreallyluckilygoodfoneespeciallyftheyoungergenerationoftodaytofindtheirdreamsfollowthemintheendmakethemcometruebecomesuccessful.Althoughit’snev
4、ereasytosucceedprogressingwiththestrongwilldiligencetowardstherightdirectionyou’llbetheone!【作文解析】這是一篇議論文。作者首先提出問題”whatissuccess”但并沒有在這個問題上著更多的筆墨,而是直接引出了自己的觀點:successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing.算是立意較為新穎的地方。隨后在
5、第二段對這種成功背后的三種必要條件做出了闡述。整體看,行文流暢,用語規(guī)范地道。本篇亮點:1.排比詞組或句子的運用:Successissomethingeveryonelooksflongsfdiesf.…namelyknowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesinpossessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinteresthavingthediligencetorealizeyourdr
6、eam.2.bearinmind3.liein4.strongwilltopursueyourinterest本文有待提高之處:1.文中人稱有些混亂。有些使用第二人稱代指讀者,有些又以第三人稱指代,建議統(tǒng)一。2.結構上,一般情況下我們建議考生使用典型的“三段式”,即,提出問題、分析問題、解決問題。該作者基本上遵循了這個原則,但第三段更多的卻是重復了第二段的中心思想,并沒有起到很好的總結作用。如果第三段,作者可以與第一段的“成功定義”相呼
7、應,例如:即使沒有這些身外之物,但心靈上的滿足,夢想的實現(xiàn),才是我心中成功的本質(zhì)。整體看,文章在語言表達和立意上還不錯。但在文章結構上有些松散,有待提高。【高分版】TheWaytoSuccessFirstessay—streamofthoughttypeTheWaytoSuccess“Geniusisonepercentinspirationniyninepercentperspiration.“herecomesourquestion
8、whatisthewaytosuccessAstrongwillgreatefftsarethemostessentialtwokeystothedoofsuccess.WhydopeoplefailtoachievetheirgoalThereasonisthatmostofthemgiveuphalfwayduetotheirlackofastrongwilloncetheyencounteranydifficulty.Amanof
9、astrongwillalwaysstickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.WouldThomasEdisonbesuchagreatmaninhistyifhehaddonenothingbutpossessingastrongwillWeareallfamiliarwithhisstythathehadtriedonethouskindsofmaterialsbefehefinallymad
10、ehisgreatbulblightup.WithouthardefftEdisonmighthavebeenanobody.Withoutefftsnoonecansucceed.Tosumupastrongwillgreatefftscanhelponeopenupthewaytosuccess.Wherethereisawillwithofusall–onlypublicnotfprofitbodiesshouldbegivent
11、hepowertocontrolthem.4.4.Googlehasinvolveditselfinalegalbattleasitigned______.A.thecopyrightofauthsofoutofprintbooksB.theinterestoftraditionalsellersC.thecopyrightofthebooksitscannedD.thedifferencesofinprintoutofprintboo
12、ks.【答案】D.thecopyrightofthebooksitscanned【解析】關鍵詞:legalbattle。關鍵句:Atitscentrehoweverisonesimpleissue:thatofcopyright.TheinconvenientfactaboutmostbookstowhichGooglehasarguablypaidinsufficientattentionisthattheyareprotectedb
13、ycopyright.5.Googledefendsitsscanningincopyrightbooksbysayingthat__________.A)makingelectroniccopiesofbooksisnotaviolationofcopyrightB)theonlinedisplayofincopyrightbooksisnotfcommercialuseC)itiswillingtocompensatethecopy
14、rightholdersD)itdisplaysonlyasmallpartoftheircontent【答案】B.theonlinedisplayofincopyrightbooksisnotfcommercialuse【解析】關鍵詞:defends。關鍵句:InitsdefenceGooglepointsoutthatitdisplaysonlysnippetsofbooksthatareincopyright–arguingtha
15、tsuchdisplaysare“fairuse“.6.WhatdowelearnabouttheclassactionsuitagainstGoogleA.ItendedinavictyftheAuthsGuildofAmerica.B.Itwassettledaftermethantwoyearsofnegotiations.C.ItfailedtoprotecttheinterestofAmericanpublishers.D.I
16、tcouldleadtomeoutofcourtsettlementsofsuchdisputes.【答案】B.Itwassettleaftermethantwoyearsofnegotiation.【解析】關鍵詞:theclassactionsuit。關鍵句:In2005theAuthsGuildofAmericatogetherwithagroupofUSpublisherspublisherslaunchedaclassactio
17、nsuitagainstGooglethataftermethantwoyearsofwranglingendedwithanannouncementlastOctoberthatGoogletheclaimantshadreachedanoutofcourtsettlement.7.WhatremainedcontroversialaftertheclassactionsuitendedA.Thecompensationfcopyri
18、ghtholders.B.ThechangeinGooglesbusinessmodel.C.Googlesfurtherexploitationofitsdatabase.D.Thecommercialprovisionsofthesettlement.【答案】D.Thecommercialprovisionofthesettlement【解析】關鍵詞:controversial。關鍵句:Itisthesecommercialprov
19、isionsthatareprovingthesettlementsmostcontroversialaspect.8.While_______Googlemakesmoneybysellingadvertising.【答案】Providinginfmationffree【解析】關鍵詞:advertising。關鍵句:“Googlesbusinessmodelhasalwaysbeentoprovideinfmationffreesel
20、ladvertisingonthebasisofthetrafficthisgenerates“9.Bookswhosecopyrightholdersarenotknownarecalled_______.【答案】phanwks【解析】關鍵詞:copyrightholder。關鍵句:Interestinthisaspectofthesettlementhasfocusedon“phan“wkswherethereisnoknownco
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